Notes

My first post on tumblr! It's the drafted sequel to 'Bargain' for Giotto x Haru that I didn't like how it turned out. I know a few were curious and now I finally have a platform to post my incompleted or 'drafted/discarded' work! :) Hopefully I'll have time to post other incompleted work or any work that I have written, but didn't have any plans on actually posting on my blog.

As for my current WIP, I'm currently working on Ambigram!

Sunday, September 25, 2011

Lies - Katekyo HItman Reborn - 698618

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Summary: It all began with an attempt to tease, an attempt to prove to the Cloud Guardian of his foolish decision of claiming that worthless woman... but for once, it seems as though the one to be fooled this time is the great illusionist himself. A MukuroHaruHibari fic, 698918 (now with a sister fic! Undercover)

First Katekyo Hitman Reborn Fic! ...though I must have been insane to write something like this when it's my first time... haha, well, I hope you guys like it!

I don't own Katekyo Hitman Reborn!

Also, another note. I have not re-read this or had this beta'd by anyone so sorry for any silly, stupid mistakes. I also am actually not that familiar with the world of KHR, hence the AU. I only know bits and pieces of it and I also know this is probably very OOC, but oh well.
AN: Sorry it took so long to write this piece, but to the people who voted that I write something about this couple, here you go and hope you enjoy!




Lies

HappyFace1886




Haru glared at the computer in front of her. It was being stubborn and refusing to input the code she had just entered. Okay, so it was an inanimate object that didn’t have any emotions of sort... but it seemed like it since whenever Verde-san was the one to input the code, it would always graciously accept. Whenever she was the one who did it, it’d just flash that annoying red box yelling ‘error’.

She sighed and was about to lean backwards when the back of her head touched something that was definitely not part of the chair. Realizing there was someone leaning over to her from behind, she yelped and scrambled to move. However, a strong warm wrapped itself around her shoulders and kept her still.

“Haru,” a familiar voice murmured, a face nuzzling into her ear.

“H-Huh?” the twenty-four year old woman stammered. She squeaked when his tongue laved over the shell of her ear and she quickly began to push against him. “Stop it! H-Hey-!”

With a long, languid lick that left her ear burning, he decided to indulge her and pull away. She turned around and felt her face flush into a deeper red when she saw him licking his lips. Placing a hand over her reddened ear, Haru turned her glower to him.

Standing tall over her –darn him for his height!-, the Cloud Guardian regarded her with a look of amusement. “Working hard?”

She crossed her arms protectively in front of her. “Of course! Haru is no slouch!”

“That must mean you haven’t taken a break yet,” he whispered, taking a step forward. Haru leaned back, her eyes widening when he placed his hands beside her on top of the table, effectively trapping her. She tilted her head back when he leaned even closer, crying out in surprise when he kissed her throat.

“W-Wait a min-!” she yelled, her hands desperately trying to shove him away. She felt teeth nibbling on her skin and panicked at the realization that that was going to leave a very noticeable mark on her. “Stop it Mukuro-san!”

The heavy body on top of her froze and she almost sighed in relief. Haru resumed pushing against him in hopes of creating some distance between them, but he appeared to have no intention of moving. Instead, he pressed his head against her neck, his muscles tight and tense under his clothes.

“How did you know?” the voice was changing, transforming to the tone of the real speaker. There was no use playing around, feigning ignorance to the accusation, especially since she had even stated a name.

“Don’t insult my intelligence,” she said with an affronted huff. Haru tensed up when she felt his hand wrap around her waist. “Hey-!”

“And don’t insult my own,” he murmured, his breath brushing against her bare skin. It sent shivers down her spine, bad shivers that screamed danger. “Explain.”

“Don’t threaten me!” she snapped back, unwilling to easily give into such a rude man. Haru resumed her struggle against him when his fingers dug into her, warning her of what he intended to do if she continued with her foolishness.

Just like her precious, pathetic lover, he wasn’t bound by the rules of the Decimo. He thrilled in destroying the Vongola’s rules and if it meant damaging one of the Decimo’s precious friends, so be it.

Haru seemed to catch onto the fact that he wasn’t in the most altruistic moods and began to settle down. However, the fierce glare belied her tranquility. “What do you want?”

“What gave away my position?” he inquired once more.

Haru seemed frustrated by the question, clenching and unclenching her hands. She was way too stressed out to deal with this situation rationally. Still, though she hated to admit it, she wasn’t in the position to make demands. Thus, summoning the patience she normally reserved for Gokudera, she spoke in a clipped tone.

“Simple observation.”

“I was behind you.”

She snorted. “After our trip to the future, after realizing just how powerless I was compared to the rest of you... do you really think I’d have just sit around and do nothing? Everyone has their own strengths. I had to find mine.”

“And it is the power of observation?” he inquired lightly.

“...I’d like to think that my abilities are more than that.” She replied tartly, having worked too hard to be so easily dismissed by this man. Haru had studied abroad in the likes of America, Germany, and Italy, gaining a renowned reputation for her computer skills along the way. She had made great contributions to the field and worked hard in order to become useful to the Vongola. “And now, Mukuro-san, I think it’s about time you explain what you’re doing.”

Haru looked down and brown eyes met those chilling heterochromic eyes. Due to how the room was dimly lit, the redness of his right eye seemed to glow brilliantly and powerfully. He was no longer assuming the form of Kyoya Hibari, his trade mark spiked pony tail sticking upward behind his head. He was resting his chin uncomfortably on her collarbone, watching her with a tinge of amusement and irritation.

“Cheeky woman,” he taunted and she bit back a snappy retort. “So there is a brain inside of that empty head of yours.”

“Excuse me?” she nearly shrieked.

“And to think, I had thought I’d be able to taunt the Cloud Guardian of how his woman had been unfaithful.” Mukuro pulled away from her, running a hand through his hair. However, he was still standing much too close for Haru’s comfort. He –who was also quite taller than her- looked down at her with a condescending sneer. “How boring.”

“Well forgive Haru for not being able to provide you with adequate entertainment,” she said sarcastically before waving her hand in a ‘shooing’ motion. “Now if you’re done, please leave. Haru has too much work to deal with a rude, pineapple-headed man with no sense of fashion.”

The biting remarks of observation seemed to strike at Mukuro who narrowed his eyes. “As expected, the vulgarity of the mafia has infected you as well.”

“Don’t you dare compare me to the mafia!” she snapped.

He looked at her in surprise and curiosity by this, the ever present annoying smirk on his face. “You are aware that you’re currently working for the mafia.”

“Tsuna-san and the Vongola aren’t mafia!” Haru said resolutely, glaring vehemently at him. “They have the name mafia attached to them, but they are nothing like those crazy, violent mafia organizations! They are kind people, who defend justice and all that’s good!”

He stared at her, as if he couldn’t believe the words this insane woman was spouting. Was she joking? Was she so stupid about the truths in the world that she couldn’t even open her eyes as to what was right in front of her? “Such a naive way of thinking. They do a few simple good deeds... and you believe that that’s enough to wash away all the evil they have committed?”

“Don’t stick the cruel actions of others with that of innocent people. Tsuna-san is a good person and so are the rest of the people that work for him.” She said firmly, a glint in her eyes telling him that no matter what he said, she wasn’t going to change his mind.

He glared at her, a frightening look especially with those unique eyes of his. However, Haru didn’t lower her stand. The amused smirk was no longer on his face. The way this woman spoke was so audacious and outright ridiculous. Just where was this conclusion coming from? Regardless of what the Decimo did, he was still the leader of an entire organization made up of violence and blood.

This woman knew nothing and yet here she was, preaching nonsense to him.

No wonder the Cloud Guardian chose this woman. She was as irritating as he was.

And yet, though he hated to admit it, she was smart. Having a backbone was well and all, but it was useless with other admirable traits. She had the intellect to back it up and the compassion supported by a fierceness rarely seen by others. Though it had merely been passing glances, Mukuro had actually seen her at work. Firm and yet kind, she stuck by her beliefs and was loyal to the bone.

Kufufufu... how dull...

“This is why you are naïve.” He whispered softly and Haru didn’t like the odd glint in his eyes. She preferred the angry or irritated one. At least she knew what he was thinking then. “Good person he may be right now, but with the passing years, do you still believe he will be the same person you trust? The mafia world is easy to get sucked into... who’s to say that he won’t start committing-.”

“Stop,” she said immediately. “Don’t say such cruel things! Tsuna-san will never change. He himself will never allow himself to change like that... and I will never allow him to change into someone like that!”

Mukuro tilted his head, the playful smile returning. “Then what of your dear Kyoya? Who’s to say that he won’t change? He already has the traits of becoming the perfect member of the mafia family...”

This time Haru returned the smile, making sure that it was a duplicate of his smile. “Those who control the flames of the Mist are tricksters. They love to play with the mind of their preys, making them doubt and lose control... don’t think you’ll fool me about anything!”

“Answer the question.” He said with hooded eyes. “What about you’re precious Kyoya? Would you still stay by his side while knowing of all the things he does? Could you embrace a murderer?”

Haru lifted her chin up stubbornly. Did he think that he could shake her just because he was approaching the topic about the man she loved? How stupid. If anything, she was even more confident when it came to him! “Kyoya will always be Kyoya. He may have some... unique tendencies, but he is still himself. He won’t kill without reason and often times, he won’t kill them at all unless there’s no other option. Kyoya may be blood thirsty, but he’s not a killer...”

“Such indomitable faith you have towards him.” Mukuro stated quietly.





“We may have our differences... but I didn’t expect you’d stoop so low as to fall for your base emotions.” Dual eyes twinkled with mischief, watching the fleeting emotions on the face of the normally stoic Cloud Guardian. The amusement immediately faded when he saw the smirk on Hibari’s face.

The bloodied tonfa was raised upward, the end pointed towards the Mist Guardian. “I didn’t fall from anything. If anything, I’ve become even greater.”

“Tied down by such a weak woman... what have you possibly achieved?” Mukuro asked with narrowed eyes. Did this man dare believe that he knew something he didn’t?

“Curious?” Hibari mocked before chuckling, walking away while leaving behind an angered master illusionist.





In the past, Mukuro had never really paid attention to Haru. There was no need to. She wasn’t important and wasn’t a threat to his plans whatsoever.

However, he had greatly miscalculated. Just because she wasn’t flamboyantly noticeable didn’t mean that she wasn’t a possible threat.

It had been happening slowly... he just hadn’t noticed it.

She had so much potential and yet, no one had ever really noticed. A strong-willed woman willing to do anything to help those who held her loyalty. She would constantly try and improve herself for the sake of those she cared about. With a very impressive intellect and wit along with that indomitable will, she was someone surely worthy of having by one’s side.

That explained it all. His attempt to trick her in order to prove to the Cloud Guardian of his stupidity had failed miserably. He had barely started in his little game and yet, had already failed. No, he had failed from the start. It had been utterly pointless trying to trick this shrewd woman.

But...

His movements were abrupt and too quick for Haru to react to. He grabbed her by the shoulders and roughly pulled her forward. Her eyes widened as she fell forward, her hands grabbing the front of his shirt for balance while her lips collided with his.

Mukuro took advantage of her shocked gasp and slipped his tongue past those parted lips, slipping his tongue deep inside of her mouth. Haru’s cries were muffled as his tongue ravaged her mouth, roving eagerly while his hand grasped the back of her neck, tilting her head backwards so that he could spear his tongue even deeper inside of her.

She whimpered, struggling to pull away, but he was much too strong for her. It was impossible for her to simply bite his tongue off for the grip he had on the locks of her hair was tight, warning her that any sudden attacks and he wouldn’t hesitate to hurt her.

As she lay helpless to his ministration, he pushed forward, relishing at the sweetness of her mouth. She tasted so delicious, much more so than he had expected. The force of his movement caused her to fall backwards, her hand reaching back in order to find balance. Her fingers clumsily hit the keyboard, knocking it onto the ground.

This was so wrong!

This wasn’t right!

Though her eyes threatened to tear up, she refused to cry. This was no time to cry! But the feel of his tongue curling around her own... it was as though he was trying to erase each and every last trace of Kyoya from her. Even the taste of his mouth was radically different from Kyoya...

The taste of Kyoya’s mouth had a sharp yet soothing taste, one she could easily drown herself in. However with Mukuro, it was simply exotic. Though she had travelled to many different countries, it was as though he was a world of his own. There was a strong taste to him... something she didn’t want to taste at all...

When he pulled away, she was breathless and angry. Her eyes glimmered with unshed tears, but they had a ferocious glower in them. Despite how her lips were bruised, they were still set in an angry scowl. The mussed appearance she held was so appealing that he was almost tempted to lean forward to steal another kiss, but her guard was stronger this time. There would be a more violent fight if he made another attempt.

With a mocking lick of his lips, Mukuro took a step back. “You are so dull...”

“Excuse me?” Haru shrieked indigently. How dare he kiss her like... like that and then immediately insult her? Just what was he playing at? Was this another attempt to confuse her?

“So dull, but that’s only due to the restrictions placed around you.” He slowly raised his hand towards her and Haru flinched, shrinking away from his touch. Mukuro chuckled and pulled away.

Did this girl not realize her potential? Most likely not due to how she was often outshined by those around her. However the Cloud Guardian had realized... he had noticed her and tried to claim her first.

But it wasn’t too late.

There was still a chance of snatching her away from him.

To take her away from the world of mafias and allow her to grow into the powerful woman she was meant to become, one worthy of standing by his side and destroying the pathetic and violent world of the mafias... She even seemed to hold a great dislike of what the mafia represented. If he toyed around with that idea, then it wasn’t impossible to bring her to his side.

Yes, to have her as his own...

“There are no restrictions on me.” She replied, looking away. And that was sort of true. No one really paid much attention to her. They took from her what they needed and that was it. Sure, there were friends and such, but there was always a tight knit bond they had with others, not with her... it was a miracle in itself that she and Kyoya had become a couple... If anything, Kyoko was close with everyone because she was Tsuna-san’s girlfriend...

Was it wrong to feel a bit bitter about that fact?

How Kyoko, by simply being Tsuna-san’s loved one, was able to rise up in the ranks merely because of that fact while Haru toiled and struggled just to be of some use?

Haru mentally shook her head quickly. This was just another one of Mist games. She loved her friends. She really did! And besides, she had Kyoya. She loved him so much. To protect him and her friends was all that mattered, not whatever it was that Mukuro was talking about.

“The fact that you believe that shows just how boring you are right now,” Mukuro reached upward again and this time, she didn’t move away, too caught up in her own thoughts. It wasn’t until he cupped her cheek, stroking the smooth skin with his thumb, did she realize just how close he was. “But...”

He was leaning closer again and Haru’s breath hitched.

No!

Stay away!

“I’ll break you free... and make you mine.”

He teased her, allowing his breath to mingle heavily with hers. Their heads touched and he allowed her to drink in his presence, to become intoxicated with it so that his words would become trapped in her mind.

At least, that was the plan. Right now, it felt more like he was getting sucked into her presence. Though she had such a petite body, he couldn’t forget what she represented. An unpolished gem... a forgotten caged bird, unloved and un-treasured...

The Vongola was truly stupid for not realizing what they had in their hands.

With her intellect, wit, and daring personality, they could easily advance and grow to the point that they would never have to worry about any competitions in the world. Though the Vongola was already revered and respected, they still did have their share of rebellions and fights... but with her... to create treaties, to create inventions, to create battle strategies...

It was mouth watering of all the possibilities...

The Cloud Guardian was a fool for have tempting him into discovering her...

For now that Mukuro knew about Haru, he wasn’t going to let her go until she was his.




::owari::




AN: Review please~! Even if you're just saying 'hi~'. I take all the reviews to heart and they're the ones that keep me going. lol, if you just pop in and read, even if this website informs me of viewers, i can't tell if it's just people who accidentally came upon this site or if they're here because they really appreciate my writing. Please and thank you! Hope you enjoyed this... my writing and this plot is a bit... er... well, not the best, but I hope you liked this anyways. n__n

23 comments:

  1. I'm so glad the MukuHaruHiba oneshot turned out this way! I was a bit skeptical about reading this because I absolutely despise threesomes. So glad it wasn't one! It would be a horror to see Mukuro and Hibari sharing Haru.
    I liked that Haru didn't want his advances, then again how can she? She has Hibari:)
    Is it weird that I can see Hibari teaching Haru how to tell illusions apart from reality since he hates them? Lol
    Please (x3) will you continue this? Cause this was just amazing! I'd love to see how Hibari will respond to Mukuro wanting his Haru and what happens. Please Lady, don't leave me hanging! Loved every bit of this!

    To the anonymous readers - Review people! Author-sama is here writing amazing fics that we all love(who in their right mind can hate her fics?), so would you leave a review? Do the right thing!

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  2. Hi. :D just spent the time catching up on you stories. Everything was good and exciting. I'm sorry I have not been able to comment sooner. Everything was hetuc and I finally remembered you did not post on ff.net anymore. I really, really love your stories. I was wondering what you had in mind for what you want people to draw for you? I'm not really good at commenting every time you update and I want to show my thanks for you creating all these stories. You presented me chance of thanking you and even if you wint use it for your header, I would still like to draw for you if you don't mind.

    suggii
    I don't know how to work these blogspot things so if anything, e-mail me at suggii_x@yahoo.com

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  3. Uwahhhhhhh~~~~
    I only read 1886 or 6986 but this is so.. Alive.. Like in character!
    I hope this isn't just a oneshot.. But it'syour choice so..

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  4. wao~ it's interesting
    i've read your fics for a long time and do you know i check this web everyday ^^
    hope you will update soon and kyoya will apear in the next chap i love 1886
    thank you for your hard work ^^

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  5. I love this story you ended it well but also left room for more chapters or a sequel if you decide to do them which I hope you do. I also love the personality you gave Haru she's smart but also has some spunk in her, you made this a very interesting story. I read your stories but I'm not that good at reviewing but I'll try and review more!

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  6. This is very interesting, I love how they see Haru and they can really see her. If that makes any sense :P
    I'm curious to see what Hibari's reaction will be and what Mokuro has planed for Haru. Loved it sorry if i don't review i tend to forget. Any who love all around and can't wait to read more.

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  7. The few stories about MokuroxHaru usually turn very boring or ver OCC but you did an amazing job keeping everything so realistic. I love the fact that you didn't turn Haru into a super-powered-perfect-mary sue character. My only complain is that is a one-shot! Maybe you could write a second part? Anyway great story!

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  8. I ship haru only with hibari and Giotto .,
    but this., this is just amazingly amazing in it's most amazing form of amazingness!
    I couldn't help but love this!! And this pairing~
    Oww emm gee~ I would love it even more if it isn't a one shot..
    But I guess it's your own decision .,
    anyway., it's great how they're so in character that I could actually imagine this happening!
    And how you made haru so special and string and admirable in a way that is not sooo overrated.
    Kudos to you ~

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  9. You have officially made me ship 6986, honestly, there aren't enough writing about this pairing!

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  10. ARGH Y YOUR WRITING SKILLS SO PERF *A*
    anyways, great story! But it DOES have the potential to become an amazing sequel. I hope you'll continue this...like, maybe Hibari notices Mukuro's interest in Haru? Then they end up fighting over her...idk bro, it's just a little idea i could try to give you if this is continued ^^ keep it up :)

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  11. Can you make a sequel oneshot?? Please, I have been reading this one over and over again because I really want to know what could be next.

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    1. I'm considering on making one of my oneshots a multi-chapter once I'm done with one of the fanfics I'm currently working on. This is one of the considerations, so we shall see. :)

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  12. I've read this one-shot once months ago, and this is my second time reading it. Couldn't help but read the comments and go giddy over the fact that you're considering making this one-shot into a multi-chaptered fic. That is why I decided, alright, time to review and give this wonderful author some proper motivation 'cause I really want for this multi-chap fic to happen.

    Alright, onward! I am a huge fan of HibaHaru, but, even so, I'm also a sucker for Haru and anyone else (at least, a majority of male characters). It's a little shallow, yes, and sometimes people pair her with anyone because they appear 'good together' rather than take their separate personalities into consideration, and just what it takes for the two to mesh well into something completely potential of a romantic relationship. I, for one, opt for the latter.

    Haru is my favorite character and she just has /so/ much potential but is often overlooked because the author makes her out to be as some sort of ditz, you know? Even though it's also clear she is smart (she attended a prestigious school and her father is a math professor), as well as loving and caring (as is obvious with children and Tsuna (even if that type of love borders infatuation)) that it gives authors (such as us) the incentive to work with her character in developing her into someone we can see her potentially becoming. ESPECIALLY when we have canon-qualities of hers to keep in mind, rather than make her some sort of Mary-Sue for no reason. With her brains, wit, and determination, Haru is the epitome of a character so easy to work with; a character that is (somewhat) easy to make it seem damn possible that she is able to get with anyone.

    This is why I LOVE your work (I've read all your fics *sly wink*). But, I must say, this is my FAVORITE. It was a little heartbreaking reading Mukuro's thoughts throughout the whole fic. He has hidden motives in tricking Haru (one he blatantly stated) and when his plan backfires, he's at a loss and can't figure just why she's so resilient. Something that started off as trying to piss of his rival, became something unexpectedly surprising to him, as he realized just why Hibari may have chose her -- and why he, Mukuro, has every reason to claim her, as well. As I stated earlier, he sees the potential in her (ugh, excuse the repetition) and GOD, you wrote that perfectly, 'cause it's everything I ever thought of as Haru. It's so nice to read a fic where someone SEES it in her, and WANTS her for it.

    Hibari was the first, and now Mukuro. I am just sososo curious as to how things will unfold as the reason for rivalry among these two became /real/ when it involves a woman that can bring the absolute best out of them, the absolute best out of any situation at hand. The type of woman they /need/ at their side.

    Kudos to you, seriously, for making me fall in love with this one-shot. If you EVER consider making it into a full-blown fic, I think I will be the most contented woman. Actually, that's an understatement, 'cause I'd feel a whole lot more emotions (MANY FEELS, I KNOW IT) but I won't get into that.

    Much love~

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    1. Wow... just... wow, when I saw this review in my email, I thought it was spam at first. I've been getting a lot of that lately for some reason. Anywho... wow... yup, that's how speechless I am. This is definitely the longest review I have ever received.

      I guess you can also say that your review was with perfect timing. Once I'm done with one of my other fanfics, this is most likely the oneshot I will turn into a multi-chapter fic. I haven't fleshed out the details since I'm in a bit of a writing slump, but I have been giving this oneshot some serious thought. I can't promise anything though. Still, there is a strong chance this will turn into a multi-chapter fanfic... so I guess you succeeded in getting me motivated. :)

      I'm the same as you in that I always saw Haru as someone with potential. In fact, a lot of the characters I adore in various mangas/books/anything are often the underdogs or unexplored characters in a series. I guess it's because my imagination can explode in how these supposed minor characters can so easily take-over and captivate people if given the right opportunities. So yes, you're right in that Haru is the epitome of an unpolished diamond. She has so much potential to be more, but was always placed in the side-lines for who knows what reason.

      o//////o and thx for taking the time to read all of my fanfics. I'm sorry I've been in a bit of a slump and the writing has been terrible in my opinion. I shall do my best to overcome it to provide good quality fanfics!

      Thank you very much for this lovely review! I loved how you dissected the characters apart and how Mukuro came to reach the feelings he did. A lot of these so called 'geniuses' need to realize that there are many hidden gems out there that can surprise the heck out of them, especially Haru! :)

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  13. I love your writing kyaaaaaaa love 6986 this couple is definitely charming love her, and I also love all your stories, especially genesis, or god that fic facina each month I hope your well below that of ambigram, Kyaaaa I love, I was following in fanfic-net, thought no longer going to continue your stories but it was a miracle to see this product found time if I can read and follow your magnificent works fast I take care and good luck

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    1. Lol thank you! xD your enthusiasm made me smile! I'm happy that you enjoy my work! I'll do my best to update as soon as I can!

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  14. Somehow, along the way, I got caught up in your writing skills! I can't get enough of your stories! But, I have to say, this one is my fave. :D I really hope that you make it into a multi-chap! I feel like a stalker, always checking your blog for updates. :)) 698618 ftw!

    Hoping for the best!

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    1. LOL no problem. Stalk away... this blog I mean, not in real life. xD Anywho, I'm still seriously considering turning this fanfic into a multi-chapter one so it's still a real possibility. Thanks for the review!

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  15. That was.. amAZING >w< I absolutely LOVE 698618 fics because Mukuro and Hibari (2 of the people in KHR WHO SEEM TO BE THE 'POSSESSIVE" CHARACTERS) always fight over the girl!! I love how you didn't make them too OOC and they stayed their fangirl-worthy personalities //melts ((Even though Kyoya only appeared for like a second you could already capture his image)) Reading through the comments i hope that you choOSE THIS TO BE YOUR MULTI-CHAP FIC BECAUSE IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL Owo I love your stories (I say love a lot don't I? Lol :DD) so keep on writing!! THANK YOU FOR SHIPPING HARU WITH EVERYWAN I LOVE~ ;D

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    1. LOL no problem! And I'm really considering writing a multi-chapter fanfic for them because I've recently finished Teach Me Love! :D We'll see how things pull through. Thanks for the review!

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  16. I HOPE YOUR MUSES GIVE YOU LOADS OF IDEAS TO CONTINUE THIS!

    The idea of MukuroHaruHibari just...it does things to me, you know? Especially with the way you're approaching them! I eagerly look forward to whatever you have planned.

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    1. Haha, I hope I can turn this into a multi-chapter fic as well, especially one that manages to live up to people's expectations. :) I haven't dare to do so, though, because of how hectic my schedule is. We'll see what happens in the future!

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