Summary: Alaude is haunted... tormented by an unseen enchantress... Alaude x Haru / A86 (Warning: Mature content)
My lack of KHR knowledge might make some things untrue or some characters OOC!
I don't own Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Please forgive any mistakes, both character-wise and grammatically-wise. I don't have time to re-read or edit things.
A Vivid Dream
HappyFace1886
The
door quietly opened into the apartment, a hint of light from the hallway
peering into the modest abode that belonged to the Cloud Guardian of the
Vongola. Icy blue eyes that were normally sharp and aware of all were unusually
glazed and distracted. There was a heavy scowl on his face as Alaude entered
his temporary home.
This was getting ridiculous. No, this had gone
past the point of being ridiculous when the problem persisted despite months
having past.
A shiver went down his spine as he felt a light
warm puff of air brushing against his neck and after months of torment, he was
barely able to stop the urge to tilt his head, to invite the lips of his
unknown siren to touch him, taste him.
It made his hands tighten into fists. His
patience was stretched thin and the door slammed heavily, nearly unhinging
itself under the force of his fury.
Alaude ran a hand through his platinum blonde
hair, ruffling it messily as he tried to get his affairs in order. He didn’t
understand when it began or what even caused it. It happened so spontaneously
and without a clue. At first, he’d thought the fool Daemon Spade had been
trying to toy with his senses again, but the mischievous Mist Guardian would
have mocked him by now for his ‘weakness’. In fact, everyone around him seemed
confused and afraid by his lack of patience and how brutal he’d be whenever he
needed to interrogate someone.
As Knuckle had once put it, it almost seemed as
though Alaude was returning to the blood thirsty state he’d been during his
youth.
...if only it was that simple.
Hands roved over his chest, almost seemingly
through his thick coat and onto his bare skin. He felt a soft pliable body
pressing him from behind, a petite figure that could have belonged to any
number of women. A finger was teasingly running up and down his chest and he
shivered, wanting so badly to give in to the touch, to grab his temptress and
shove her against the wall and teach her the consequences of tempting him so.
If only he knew how to find her! Was it even a
person? Or was he really going insane?
He threw his coat aside, hoping the movements
would clear his mind a bit, and walked with heavy footsteps to his bedroom. His
tie was next to be thrown off and it aggravated his pride when he turned to
look at the mirror and saw how breathless he was, the humiliation seeping out
of him when he saw the flush of his cheeks. It wasn’t working.
The hands moved and he felt them gently grab the
sides of his face, fingers affectionately stroking the side of his face. His
blue eyes were vividly dark, his breath strained as he struggled to retain some
sort of self-control. Just who was this person?
A soft and gentle pair of lips shyly brushed
themselves against his own and he groaned, wanting to lean in further, to get a
taste of what was being offered. Was he losing his mind? Or perhaps this was a
trick by the enemy?
If only he could reach...
If only he had some form of control!
His flames threatened to erupt out from around
him through his pent up frustration and right now, he didn’t give a damn if he
blew up the entire place. But as the fire flickered on his person, his ring
came alive with flames and he saw a slight glimmer of a figure before him. His
eyes widened momentarily before they sharpened, his flames intensifying briefly,
the Cloud ring burning brighter, before he turned to concentrating them right
before him... right where the figure was still pressing their lips against his.
From the mirror, he saw her first. Long dark
chocolate brown hair cascading down her shoulders to her upper back with a slim
waist and a petite figure, as he’d correctly deduced after months of having
that warm pliable body pressed so intimately against him. His eyes immediately
moved from the mirror and to the now tangible figure before him, the young
woman’s eyes closed as she continued pressing her lips gently against his own.
Her hand was clutching the back of his neck, pulling him forward in order to
maintain their chaste kiss while her other hand was pressing against his chest.
She was so close that he could smell her pleasant
scent, one that’d hauntingly appear from time to time in the midst of his
hallucinations. It would always leave him yearning for more, to have a deeper
whiff of the smell that’d mesmerized him so.
His arms automatically wrapped themselves around
her as though to prevent her from vanishing, pulling her even closer as he
pressed his lips harder against hers, his tongue already brushing against the
seams of her lips in a silent request for more. The woman parted them so
eagerly and he could feel the smile on her face, the soft sweet sounds coming
from her throat making him growl as he finally reveled in the fruit that’d been
forbidden to him for too long. His tongue aggressively ravaged her mouth, wetly
curling around her own while his hand clutched the back of her neck, unable to
satiate his hunger for more.
There was no preamble as he suddenly spun them
around and pushed forward, the two falling on top of his bed with his larger
frame pinning her down. He briefly and regretfully pulled away from the kiss,
turning towards her neck while she tilted her head to the side, whimpering as
he roughly nipped the column of pale skin with his marks. Whatever she wore
would normally be considered scandalous due to how the strange cream colored
dress exposed so much of her neck and shoulders, but right now, he relished at
the openings it gave him.
He couldn’t stop his groan when she wrapped her
legs around him, her hot and inviting heat nearly burning through his pants as
he felt his hardened member straining to reach her. His self-control was nearly
shot. Months of torment that chipped away at his will-power were now showing
their results, nearly crumbling his normally unbreakable willpower as the
object of his desire now remained trapped beneath him.
“I finally
found you,” he practically purred huskily into her neck, the words tumbling
out in his native tongue while he laved with his tongue at the tender spot he’d
just nipped at. There was a pause and then a breathless, teasing whisper, this
time in another foreign language he was all too familiar due to his knowing of
the Rain Guardian of the Vongola.
“Since when did you learn French?” she inquired
gently and Alaude found her voice to be sweeter than expected. There was a
light innocent tinge to it that he was unaccustomed to and for a moment, he
wondered who this enchantress was. Where did she even come from? He pulled back
slightly in order to get a better look at her and found himself mesmerized by
large brown eyes staring up at him warmly. The eyes then peered at him in
confusion through the darkness of the room, her hand running through his hair.
“...your hair seems... lighter than usual.”
Her touch was so soothing and Alaude shivered at
the desire that ran through him. In any other circumstance, he’d have stepped
away to analyze the situation, but right now, he found that he couldn’t bring
himself to care. She was here. Finally. The woman who’d haunted him for so
long.
Before she could say another word, Alaude kissed
her once more and felt as though every iota of his body was crying in relief at
that single touch. Yes, this felt so right, so perfect. And he was never one to
deny himself of what he wanted. There was no need to worry about whether she
was an enemy or not. Even through the haze of lust he could tell that she was
of no danger to him. The questions could wait. He could not.
“Your name,” he murmured this time in Japanese
while his lips trailed down from her mouth and to her chin, tracing her jawline
with butterfly kisses that made her tremble beneath him. “What is your name?”
His words vaguely registered in her mind, but
still puzzled her all the same. “W-What are you-?”
“Tell me,” he repeated, his hand stroking the
exposed thigh gently, causing her breath to hitch, her dress having scrunched
up scandalously up to her waist due to how her lucious thighs cradled him
between her legs.
“H-Haru,” the name came out in a stammer as her
fingers clutched onto his shirt, her small form trembling under the gentle
touch of his fingers against her sensitive skin. What game was he playing at?
This didn’t make any sense! “Ky-.”
Her words were silenced as Alaude kissed her once
more, thrilled at finally having a name to this mysterious woman. Haru. The
name meant spring, if he remembered correctly. How fitting.
At first she resisted his advances, still bemused
by what was going on, but eventually melted under his arms as he devoured her
mouth with a renewed vigor. She tasted so addictive, a subtle sweetness that he
hungrily drank in despite his usual aversion to them.
His fingers strayed to her back where he found
the zipper, distracting her with his lips while he quietly tugged down the
fastener until the previously form fitting dress was loosened. Without warning,
he practically ripped the dress off of her, pulling it down quickly in order to
expose her bare to his hungry and desperate eyes.
His mouth dried at the sight before him, the
shyness of her flushed face as she timidly looked to the side. For someone
who'd been so eagerly returning his kisses, it was amusing to see her so
alluringly bashful... so ripe for the taking....
And after months of being teased and tormented,
he couldn't wait any longer.
Haru gasped when Alaude buried his face into the
crook of her neck, hungrily nipping and sucking on the supple skin. She could
feel her bra loosening as his nimble fingers made quick work of the clasp
behind her. The material was all but yanked off of her, thrown to who knows
where into the room. Before she could remark about how rough he was being (even
more so than usual), a smoldering hot mouth enveloped her breast and she
couldn't stop her cry of pleasure.
Alaude groaned at the taste of her breast, so
silky soft and pliable under his tongue. He laved her skin with near obsession,
relishing in her breathy moans and how she'd moan so temptingly with her back
beautifully arched when he finally stopped teasing her to run his tongue over
her pouting nipple. Alaude growled in approval when he felt her fingers weave
into his hair, tugging at it frantically with each stroke of his tongue. How
he'd dreamed of this moment for so long. And then there was how she'd cradle
him with her delectably long legs, the way her nails would drag down his skin
as she'd become lost with her desire for more. For him.
Haru cried out in surprise when she was roughly
flipped over so that she was on her stomach. Before she could say anything, a
soft material was wrapped firmly around her head, encasing her eyes in complete
darkness. She gave a startled gasp and was about to demand an explanation when
she felt his hot tongue running from her shoulders and down to the sensitive
part of her back. Haru ended up moaning shakily with her hands clenched into
fists. Her lack of vision made her completely unprepared for his movements,
leaving her helpless to what was to come next.
"Ky-!" A hand firmly grabbed her face
and tilted it backwards, earnest lips claiming her own and she felt as though
she was being devoured whole. A strong, hot bare chest was pressing down at her
from behind while he continued to dominate her mouth. She'd seen and felt what
it was like when Hibari was aroused beyond control, but this seemed to go
beyond that. The closest she could compare was the time after she and Hibari
had been separated for nearly half a year because of work... that night had
been so rough and so frantic, their hands and mouths anxious to touch each
other, that she'd hardly been able to walk the next morning.
Large hands gripped onto her hips, tilting it
upward and rubbing a hot, rock-hard member against her plush bottom, protected
only by her flimsy, modest underwear. Judging by the searing heat that was
practically branding her skin, she was likely the only one wearing something
down there right now. Haru mewled lightly and raised her hips higher, wantonly
rubbing herself against him in a silent plea for more.
She vaguely heard him swear violently in French
again, or at least she thought he was swearing due to how guttural the sound
had been. It was sometimes hard to understand what was going through Kyo-kun's
mind on a normal basis, but tonight was even stranger. But again, she wasn't
given the opportunity to voice her thoughts, a sharp gasp escaping her as her
underwear was torn off before she felt him rub his cock between her soaking
nether lips, generously coating his member with her essence.
"Please," she begged, shivering at how
her body seemed to crave the hardness of his length, especially with how he'd
firmly rub against her engorged clit with each thrust. Haru didn't resist as
she was turned around again, spreading her legs wide and invitingly for him to
enter inside of her.
Alaude panted harshly. Drinking in the sight
before him. This wouldn't end with just tonight. He wouldn't allow it. Perhaps
it was just lust cloying with his mind, but the sight of her so earnestly
wanting him, the evidence of her soaking desire for him, was enough to put him
out of his mind. He clutched onto her legs, keeping them open as he swore
vehemently in his native tongue. "You
are mine."
Haru cried out as he entered inside of her to the
brim in one sharp thrust, elation and satisfaction bursting through her at
being so deliriously full. There wasn't even time to revel at the sensation of
him being inside of her, to drown in the feeling of how her inner walls were
possessively clutching onto him, as he suddenly set a harsh pace that left her
writhing beneath him for more.
"You're
mine," Alaude repeated into her neck, nipping and sucking at the
marked flesh to add even more traces of his possession of her. He branded her
skin with his vow, the words strengthened with his Cloud flames that seemed to
dance euphorically in the air.
Haru didn't know what he was saying and it didn't
seem to matter at the moment. All she could focus on was the feel of his heavy
thrusts, the hot panting of his breath, and how she wanted nothing more than to
have him buried within the deepest parts of her. "Kyoya!"
Alaude gritted his teeth at the sound of another
man's name, angling his hips in order to thrust against the sensitive bundle of
nerves that left her shuddering and crying for more. Only this once would he
allow this to pass. Just this once would he allow her to cry out for the man
who looked like him when it was he who was making her tremble beneath him. This
will simply be the first of many more to come.
His blue eyes, darkened with lust, watched as the
woman sensually moved beneath him with her bewitching dance.
No matter what, he'd find her.
Alaude kissed her hard, his hands reaching
between them where the two were wetly joined together as one.
Regardless of who may have her heart right now...
His fingers rubbed against the engorged little
button that was being roughly pressed against his erect member, the two forces
putting pressure against the sensitive bundle causing Haru to briefly freeze.
She then released a loud, throaty cry, one that seemed to be a strangled
version of her lover's name, as she felt herself being pushed over the edge.
He'd steal her away, bury himself so deep inside
of her that there was no way she could forget about him.
Alaude himself almost faltered at the vice grip
her inner walls had a hold over him and dug his fingers into her hips, shakily
groaning into her lips while he forced himself to thrust against the tight and
inviting warmth that seemed to have a near impossible hold over him.
He sharply cried out her name, a blessed mantra,
his release erupting deep inside of her with a sudden abruptness that seemed to
have her reeling. Her walls clamped onto him, greedily milking him for all of
his seeds while he emptied himself inside of her. He heard her throaty sigh,
her legs and warms clutching onto him while she tilted her hips upward as
though to take more of him within her.
He heard her shakily breathing as he lifted his
head upwards, brushing his lips gently across hers own. He removed his tie from
around her head so that he could look into her alluring brown eyes, sated and
glazed from his touch. It felt so right to have her pinned beneath him like this,
to be intimately entwined around each other while she gazed up at him
adoringly.
Alaude swore by the Cloud Ring of the Vongola
Famiglia, by every title and legend he’d forged with his mere existence.
He deepened the kiss and Haru welcomed him with open
affection, parting her lips and curling her tongue around his own. She ran her
fingers through his hair and he groaned against her mouth at how she’d tug
gently at his damp locks, playfully pulling him closer to her. Her breath
hitched as he began to rock his hips against her in a steady rhythm, his
already hardening length quickly swelling inside of her. As if he would be
satisfied after just a single taste of her. Especially not after all those
months of torment. Alaude grabbed her hands and knitted their fingers together,
keeping her hands pinned by the sides of her head while the wet and loud
thrusts of his hips grew more relentless, his mind driven mad for more as he
felt her velvety tight walls fluttering wantonly against his pulsating length.
The room began to become filled with her cries for more while he indulged
himself with her sweet delectable mouth.
He would
find her and make her his.
::owari::
AU: ...oh god, this has finally been posted. (Hides face in shame). I finally managed to get my butt into gear with this after reading the lovely sllebswap's latest chapter of Dino x Haru for Serendipity. My god, I love her writing! She's opened my eyes to the beauty of Dino x Haru! Also, currently, she's literally my only source of inspiration writing-wise. I think I went through all the available fanfics and fanarts for Haru and she's the only one still posting new content, so please show her some love and leave a review or two for her wonderful, amazing, fantabulous fanfics! Whenever I go through a dry spell, reading her fanfics sparks my muse and helps me write! That's how I was able to finish this!! T___T Also, I'm sure once you give her a shot, you'll adore her fanfics as well. Her Bel x Haru fanfics are amazing!! I still re-read them from time to time when I get stuck with my fanfics.
I'm sure plenty of us have felt the effects of losing artists and writers for the KHR fandom after the series ended, so now is the time to band together! Writers and artists take time out of their busy schedules and use their meager free time to draw and write to share with others. I'm sure she'll also appreciate all the lovely reviews she'll receive and write even more delicious fanfics for Haru! (Seriously, go read the new chapter. Even if you're not a Dino x Haru fan, I'm sure that chapter will convert you!!!) I know I'm certainly lucky to have you all! Lol, reading her fanfics also remind me of what it's like to be a reader and desperate for more. I want more of her chapters!! xD
Thanks for all the support, everyone!
Also, just to let you guys know, January is going to be a difficult month for me. I'll still try to update though~~! I was only able to succeed today because reading sllebswap's latest chapter made my muse demand that I take a breather from real life obligations to finish this, haha.
PS: For now, Alaude is French in my head. Originally he was German for some reason in my head, but after learning that his name was French, I decided to go with the French nationality. So until I learn otherwise, he's French, haha.
PSS: Below is the alternate ending I was going to post when I was stuck on how to finish this oneshot. I had been stuck right in the middle of the oneshot and had thought about just ending it before the smut even happened, leading to this scene below... To anyone still confused on what was going on in the oneshot, it was basically supposed to be a scenario where the past and present seemed to mesh a bit, where every time Haru shows Hibari affection, Alaude would feel it for some reason... and after months of being tormented by her affectionate touches, it was getting to him. As for Haru crying out Hibari's name while being intimate with Alaude, it was supposed to be implied that she doesn't realize that she's literally been transported through time and Alaude doesn't give her the chance to realize what's going on. ^^;; Sorry for the confusion. Anywho, hope you guys enjoy the content below~! Below is just an alternative ending, so I can't really say that it's fully 'canon' in the world of this oneshot!
::Outtake::
Hibari twitched as he
stared at his slumbering lover who was clutching onto his shirt. Being a light
sleeper, he’d sometimes awaken when Haru was restless and moved around at
night. Normally that matter was resolved by him simply holding onto her tightly
and trapping her limbs against his, but it was a different problem today...
“Your hair... Kyo-kun...”
she mumbled incoherently in her sleep, “it’s blonde...”
There was only one person
that came to his mind when it came to a similar appearance and blonde hair. He
only remembered because of how frequently the name and comparison had come up during
his middle-school years.
Alaude. The Cloud
Guardian for the Primo Vongola.
His hand roughly grabbed
onto her face, gripping her cheeks together tight enough to mush them together.
“Haru,” he said roughly. “Wake up.”
“N-No,” for a moment he
thought she’d waken up, but was proven wrong when she made an enthralling
mewling sound that made him freeze. “W-Wait... S-Stop... I...”
As much as he loved to
hear such sweet sounds from her, it thoroughly pissed him off that it wasn’t
because of him she was making them. And he couldn’t even confront this Alaude
person since, apparently, he was making an appearance in Haru’s own mind.
Having had enough of this
farce, Hibari grabbed her cheeks and pulled at it none-too-gently. Apparently
it was enough for Haru to finally awaken from her surprisingly deep slumber.
Her eyes opened and tears sprang out from the pain. She stared blearily at her
attacker before her eyes widened. “Kyouwa?”
Haru proceeded to squeak
when she felt and even saw the malevolent aura springing from her boyfriend’s
body.
“Hahi!”
“Just who was the one
causing you to make those sounds in your sleep?” Hibari demanded slowly. “And
what exactly was going on in there?”
She stared at him,
completely confused. Why was he so angry? And in her dreams? ....it seemed as
though it’d been a blonde haired Kyo-kun... though why he’d been blonde there,
she still didn’t know. It wasn't as though she'd ever fantasized about Kyo-kun
being blonde. Not to mention blue eyed. "I-I don’t understand!”
“Then shall I remind you
of the sounds you were making?” he inquired with narrowed eyes, easily pinning
her down beneath him. Haru stared at him incredulously, wondering what was
going through the mind of her normally level-headed lover... granted, he was
only level-headed when it came to matters of not escalating a thrilling,
blood-thirsty fight...
Oh my so hot so sexy. Reading this make me feel hot too (♡´艸`) I thought this will be the continuation of your other alaudexharu fic but this idea is brilliant too (≧▽≦) Now I want sequel, please. Every fic you post I always want sequel(@^▽^@) I feel very grateful for your and sllebswap's fic. You guys are both great writer for Reborn fandom. Thank you very much (*'∀'人)♥*+
ReplyDeleteHaha! Yay! Glad you liked it! Actually, I do have an idea in mind if I do a sequel... but not sure if I'll have the time to completely flesh it out! Thank you very much for your support! :D Thanks for the review~~~
Delete( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I'm jealous of my girl Haru, she got both D's. Now I'm imagining an Alaude x Haru x Hibari sandwich. xD It's kind of funny thinking about it though because you just know they are going to turn it into a competition. "Only I can make her come undone this quick Herbivore." R.I.P Haru 😂 I feel like I need to bathe in holy water now lmao. Sorry for rambling there but you inspired me lol. Whenever you update I squeal so hard because your writing skills are on point. Everything flows together so well and your characterization is on point.
ReplyDeleteLOL yes, I'm jealous of her too. And I can also easily imagine a Alaude x Haru x Hibari sandwich. It's a very amusing mental image where those two are sort of fighting over her and at the same time just fighting each other because they think they're better than each other. :D I'm glad you enjoyed this so much! I do have a sequel in mind, but no idea if I'll ever have the time to write it out! Thanks for the review~~ :D
DeleteGoodness! It was a sweet temptation. Wow! Another captivating one shot of yours. A spine-chilling. This is definitely interesting - an exquisite rivalry between the two bearer of the cloud rings. Please do make a sequel for this, hahaha.
ReplyDeleteI really thought it was all Alaude but right in the middle of their intimate, scorching passion, Haru just cried out 'Kyoya's name'. I was a bit confused for a short while,hahaha. But after I done with the 'Outtake', my excitement went overboard hahaha. I'd love to know how this rivalries of both cloud guardians of Vongola turns out. And how Haru face her internal battles of confusion between her beloved Kyoya and this mystery dream guy who bear resemblance to her lover?
I can't imagine how jealous Kyoya would be over his past counterpart? or what he'll do since it's all in Haru's mind? I'm sure after witnessing Haru's midnight dream pleasures, he will definitely vying to give Haru's breathtaking pleasures too. You see, how he ripped her shirt at the end of the outtake?haha
Thank you again. Such a compelling one-shots and I can't help myself re-reading it all over again. It really makes my day. Waiting for more,hahaha. Have a nice day. Goodluck!
Haha, I do have a sequel in mind (sort of). I just need the time to think it over and write it out. Fingers crossed that I'll have the time for that! January is sort of a mess for me, so it's going to be difficult for me to write anything @_@
DeleteSorry that things got a wee bit confusing. I guess my writing-style is more like 'go-with-the-flow' type of thing with the hopes that things will get cleared up in the future. @_@ though for things to get cleared up, this oneshot would have to be much longer... hence the explanations in the end, haha. Hopefully I'll have time to write a longer one!! I'm glad you still enjoyed this though! xD If I ever get the time to write a sequel, we'll see how it plays out for Haru. It must definitely be confusing for her, especially if/when she finds out that it wasn't Kyoya she just slept with, but Alaude.
I can't say 100% that the outtake is 'canon' in this oneshot. The outtake was thought of when I got stuck in the middle of writing A Vivid Dream. However, since I was able to finish it, I'm not sure if I still want the outtake. If I was to write a sequel, there might be a variation of it in there, but the actual outtake scene might not happen the way it was depicted above. @__@ Sorry for the confusion. But yeah, I can't imagine Kyoya being happy about sharing Haru without anyone. He doesn't seem like the type who likes to share and I also can't imagine Haru being unfaithful towards him... at least knowingly, haha!
Thank you for this wonderful review! It was a delight to read! :D I shall try and post something soon!!
The ending part I just found to be amazing, a jealous and possessive is a hot Hibari (: I love reading how you write this pairing (especially considering the fact that you're the reason that I got into that ship in the first place). And hey any work you put up is always amazing so I don't mind the wait for the next story ♡♡
ReplyDeleteYes... I should write more jealous and possessive Hibari. It's just hard to do it without making him so OOC. I'm glad you've converted to this ship! I find this to be a beautiful, wonderful, and sinfully addictive ship! xD Thanks for your patience and the review!
DeleteOh sweet heaven! You nailed it again. Another benchmark of chilliness and explosive entertainment. I mean, you got the details right and I can't help myself from the excitements and giggles,haha. What a surprise twist? I don't want to be selfish because it's all for Alaude/Haru but I like how you wrote the outtake. So, it was a dream afterall.
ReplyDeleteFor me, Alaude and Kyoya was no difference except of course for their hair and eye color. But their attitude and behavior was the same. While I'm reading it Kyoya was all in my head. What a heck?haha. Sorry I just love him more,haha. Alaude was freaking hot and harsh and Haru was too submissive..lustful and tempting, chilled out..haha. I did laughed when while Alaude lavish her with unlimited pleasures, all Haru could ever say or think is Kyoya. I so love it.
They both (Alaude/Kyoya) seems to be so territorial when it comes to possession. And that makes it so interesting. And I love the outtake, the jealous Kyo-kun. And Haru as usual still oblivious as to why her lover get mad. I can't imagine what he'll do to our Lovely brunette,Haru. Definitely, drown her into insanity haha. Bite her to death with intensifying pleasure..whoa! my innocence ripped out of me haha.
You never stop to amaze me with your promising one-shot. Thanks a lot. Waiting for more 1886. This pair makes me crazy all the times. Well, I totally enjoy this one-shot. Thanks once again.
Wow, I feel like your review came in just in time. Haha, well the other reviewers also made me very, VERY happy, but I was randomly re-reading this oneshot again and suddenly felt very embarrassed over it because it just didn't sound that great. @__@ Also, sorry for the confusion, but whether it's really a dream or not is supposed to be left ambiguous. The 'outtake' was just something I made up when I thought I wouldn't be able to finish this because I got terribly stuck right in the middle of writing this.
DeleteHaha, at first I had difficulty differentiating the two as well. However, since I was trying to write something of the two, I think I started to notice subtle differences between them. Like Alaude seems more aloof compared to Hibari, though Alaude might actually be more caring than Hibari (i.e. drama CD for the Vongola Primo, Alaude was actually concerned about Giotto, though he tried to hide it). Alaude seems more cooperative with his fellow Guardians and willing to be around them more so than Hibari, who'll still try to beat them up for crowding him (i.e. Alaude was willing to have dinner with them, according to Primo's drama CD).
xD Yeah, unfortunately for Alaude, Haru thought she was actually with Kyoya, hence the wrong name shouting. He was pissed about it, but what can he do... hahaha.
I'll try to write more soon~~! This month is a bit intense for me, so I might not be able to dish anything out until next month! >___< Thanks for the review!